Well...
It has a.... lighter feel to it. It sounded pretty decent until the instrument at :32 came in. It seemed to drown out that calm feeling you had to the song (in my opinion) you should try experimenting with some other instruments and see what comes out of
it. Also the instrument at 1:04, you made the notes get continuously higher, I think instead of making higher notes at the second part of that try making it go a bit lower to. It made sound a bit awkward. Wow I hope you know what im talking about, I read this over and my descriptions are awful ;I