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[remember {DU}]

Dude

Almost forgot to review this song, but better late than never right? First off, this song really sounds like you put a lot of work into it. Usually longer songs like this are repetitive, but this is not. The song also has a nice natural flow which is the most important part. There is a lot more positive things I can say about this song but I believe I have said enough for you to get the picture. I'm glad you finally have a song that has been viewed enough, you deserve it. 5/5 10/10

decoyultimatum responds:

thanks
this song is like an extension of me i just emptied every last bit of my soul into this

[here with you {DU}]

I see what your getting at.

I like the simplicity of it, but you need a piano that sustains notes for a longer period of time so the tone of the song has time to set in. Also it seemed a bit repetitive, but it is a pleasant song to listen to.

decoyultimatum responds:

ya i know i had my piano sustaining longer but it made a strange ringing noise i figured it was an eq or balence issue but after sifting though it i couldnt find anything and it wasnt a standard volume issue so i had to shorten them to keep from the aggresive hum it was emiting

[why we fight {DU}]

Good

This is good but I would say that the song was mostly repetition. Got tired of listening to this song pretty quickly, 5/5 7/10

decoyultimatum responds:

ya thats why its a game loop so you arent focused on the music the music is supposed to just give a little background structure so you arent playing a silent game
but i too grow kinda tired of it :)

[goodbye full {DU}]

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I'm speechless. 5/5 10/10

decoyultimatum responds:

:) thanks man it really does mean a lot to me

[calm wip {DU}]

Good

The only thing that I can say is what's already been said- the drums are a little too loud and a bit overpowering. Really sounds nice so far though.

decoyultimatum responds:

thanks glad you like it :)

[willpower {DU}]

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It sounds as if you didn't do very much with the song. The climax is a little cheap, it gets very repetitive but I really liked 2:04- 2:30. The song is good overall, but I KNOW that you can do much better.

decoyultimatum responds:

ya i know i just have no idea what to do with this its like its making fun of me for not being good enough to finish it
what was changed was dynamics and an added synth so ya not a lot changed :(

[willpower wip {DU}]

No climax

As far as i can tell, the song just coasts. You need to add a climax, and have the song slowly begin to end. Also, when I listen to this, it sounds like this should be a background noise, try adding a more intense instrument to lead the song, and have it correspond to this background.

decoyultimatum responds:

thanks i think i can do that. when i got to this point of the song i was like its awesome ....but somethings wrong with it :(

[freak {DU}]

Good but...

I'm going to agree with turdz: the track never really worked up any momentum. It just started and ended at the same tempo. Starting slower would've given the song the feeling of dramatic suspense and would've made it better. It's good but it needs work.

decoyultimatum responds:

lol i had so much freaking trouble trying to make the tempo change work i just gave up on it and got rid of the tempo change

[waves {DU}]

Yep

I like how you gradually slowed down the tempo at the end. The song creates a relaxed setting and I just love it :)

decoyultimatum responds:

lol fading the tempo and volume took me forever to figure out how to do it the right way the ending is also like my favorite part of this whole song

[sd2 {DU}]

Wow

That was... beautiful. When I made this I went for a different approach, but yes, I see what you mean. I'll see what I can do with the song I'm working on :)

decoyultimatum responds:

ya to be honest i really loved it myself but there is still a lot i want to do with it i just dont have the time to right now and i wanted you to see what i meant about harmonies and stuff